All Comments on 'Response'

the whole idea of this.

when using this few words, though, you have to make every one count..

Try doing it one verse at a time and finding the Perfect word to describe it

do hips " arch" or do they " reach"?

you see?

I think there's a great poem here if you find just the right words...

: )

there is the end line "time lapses" that seems like such a letdown after all the glorious lovemaking. A reminder that nothing lasts forever I suppose....Good work Irish.