All Comments on 'Returning to find...'

by The Mutt

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
This...

...is scorching. Unique and well-worded images. A great read.

perksperksalmost 20 years ago
perkspective

wet, white ectoplasm? Dude, seriously? Who you gonna call?

GHOSTBUSTERS!!!... or is that nutbusters? *laughing*

EumenidesEumenidesalmost 20 years ago
A fetish poem?

Cool

The part I liked about it was the "Drawing desire

down into a pearl drop

of time..." and then you totally lost me when you broke up less ness into two separate lines.

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
lol

i wasn't sure what to say in the thread when it popped up, i'm still not sure what to say.

i could purrrr..lol

this was great though mutt!

lucky-E-levenlucky-E-levenalmost 20 years ago
*rowr*

What more can I say? I'm definitely leaving panties behind the morning after my next hot night. *wink*

~lucky

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
hey hot stuff

this sizzles. Good poem.

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