All Comments on 'Rich Would Be'

I like this rhymie thing,

seems to fold in on itself and go in different directions.

Anti-Hallmark at its best.

"Theres nothing at the store" is the line that caught my attention! Thanks.

This has a nursery rhyme feel with a very mature sentiment. Excellent.

Fly (for some reason my username doesn't come up for pc's)

all but the fourth line.

There's nothing at the store?