by tungtied2u
I love this. Especially the first two lines. I may just have to print those out.
even the danger signs are intriguing.
good write, tt2u
good to see you back
xox
maria
I find this a fairly fresh use of the road/journey/life metaphor.
I like the first stanza strong, but would like to see "unanswered doors, lowered blinds" rethought perhaps.
And I am rubbed wrongly by "gas" in the middle stanza.
The third is the strongest.
Thanks for the read.