All Comments on 'Rocks, Splash of Water'

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tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Left me warm

on the inside. Really evoked the chill of fall. Thanks.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Must

have been a good scotch.

Excellent wording.

I can taste it and smell it

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
A new poet...

...and the words that are here rock! The images and phrasing show power and great promise of a strong new voice.

fawniefawnieover 19 years ago
i hate scotch..

and i hate the chill of winter.

i liked the poem though! lol

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