All Comments on 'Roller Derby Queen'

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Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Roller Balls.....

Nicely done here once again. I remember vividly the Roller Derby icons of the 60's and 70's in California and your imagery brought that and more back into focus. Doesn't your Queen know that there are operations available now to reach your phallic dreams?! Had to comment.... Great Job!

erectus123erectus123about 11 years agoAuthor
maybe that......

is what she is thinking of....but a transsexual would never get all that pussy* or be allowed on an all girls team, I think it is a fun poem but I think the first half is much stronger than the second, what do you think?

*excuse my French

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