by RhymeFairy
Sexy and captures that hot blood nicely. A few cuts here and there to sharpen the feel and images and it would easily merit a 100. Nice work!
It might be my fertile imagination, but I keep getting the image of a lithe, sweet, gentle fairy morphing into a blood-frenzied vampire ... *shudders*
Powerful words that can't let anyone indifferent. I like it!
seems the intensity of rough sex has a lure of its own <grin (~_~) nice poem and I enjoyed the ride.