All Comments on 'Rubied...'

the first time I read you that you would be a poet to watch. Keep up the good work!

but your killing me with all the (...) lotsa people overdue it, I find myself ending every other poem with it in the early drafts. But the thing is, every poem is only saying a bit of what you want to say, we already have the (...) as readers of poems in our head. It's a habit, you can use commas just as easily most places. It's the sort of thing that will make a magazine editor automatically pass on your work no matter how good. Keep writing.