by demure101
In running through the new poems, I missed this one - probably confused it with 'Fatigue' in running down & thought I'd read it.
OK, so no one is interested in my saying that but I think I benefited from having read and mulled over 'Fatigue' first & the two seem closely related - different takes on the same metaphor.
Also - this is now my favourite of the three. I look forward to rereading it a few more times.