All Comments on 'salaciously, snowmelt said to ocean'

Tess was right, if a poem could be a cartoon, it would look just like this one.

cute and coy, excellent wordplay :)

xoxox

maria

I'm reading all of yours and voting, but I had to comment on this for it made me smile! Thank you!

Boo

I like this poem - if one could create a poem-cartoon or a cartoon-poem - this is what it would look like.

Thanks for sharing it, Tzara.

Tess

a light little verse;

no intense thought here,

or profound emotion;

but an innocent well-place chuckle.

Nice wordplay, simply stated, almost too cute ending....I liked it!