All Comments on 'Sarah'

So sensuous. I felt as if you were actually making love to me. Wonderful erotic poem!

so wonderfully sensual. Captures my feelings of wordhip of a succulent pussy. Well done.

Poetry has never been one of my favorite literature styles... but today that changed! You are truly a master of the English language. Your choice of words, strung together in little phrases, connecting into wonderful thoughts. Ohhhhhhh, how I burn inside and wish that I could be a scented candle in the room while you, Jackie, make love to your Sarah.

I love the end of your poem:

"A little bit of heaven all moist and full of flavor,

Is Sarah, my little Sarah, all pure and sweet"

You have portrayed a scene that we as men cannot duplicate, but completely appreciate... and would give anything to be your student and learn how to love our "Sarah" the way you do. We would want to know how to receive our "Sarah's" love and to be able to control our trembling "cum" so that we mutually explode together.

Your words are beautiful and bring joy to my sex organ, the most powerful one I have, my mind and emotions. Oh, Jackie, stir me again with another poem about you and Sarah - truly a beautiful relationship and expression of woman to woman love, the real thing.

I read this and think about my own inability to make love on such a high level of mutual sharing and selfless giving. It makes me understand why I often read that no one loves a woman like a woman.

Paint me another picture of this wonderful experience: a woman genuinely in love with a woman… and then and only then genuinely making love to her lover... Without the genuine, shared love, the rest is only sex, just a good fuck! I prefer it to be bathed and coated in love! … as I imagine you, Jackie, do also…

Thank you for sharing this canvass with us. Thank you for allowing us to enter this very private, intimate part of your life. You truly are an erotic verbal artisan!

Jackie,

I found your page on the lit site and made you a "favorite author". Normally, poetry does not do much for me....however your two poems are simply beautiful.

I notice we have some of the same favorite authors.

Montfluery