All Comments on 'Savage Jewels'

i also almost hit the door early, and am very glad i read this through / i think the last stanza is stupendous /

with a twist of humor at the end.

Very nice...made me smile despite the "ouch" factor.

earrings...

hehehe

Read the first couple of lines, and was about to bail out... thinking "not my cup of tea". I didn't, and I'm glad.

"your semen

my blood

spilled against the specter

of your impotence"

That is a graphic, frightening and disturbing image. Well done!

automatically squeezed together while reading this...eep! Very, uh...nice poem.