Scarlet Reminder

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The coffee cup is stained with your bright smile.
I envy that is shared your crimson touch.
Beneath your lip print, Van Gogh’s Starry Night, it’s luster lost
compared to lips as such.
The candle flickers like a firefly.
I blow it out.
You’re gone.
What can I say?
The stars swirl on within the deep, blue sky.
I sigh and wipe the scarlet brand away.

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oregon_galoregon_galover 18 years ago
delicious!

expertly said. lovely to read. like a sweet cherry, i savored it!

tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
Nicely framed

.... the lipstick speaks for itself.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Scarlet Reminder

wistful melancholy

but a little choppy

and uneven.

question:

Should "is" in line 2 be "it"?

Is "it's" in line 3 supposed to be a contraction or possessive?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
wistful

and nicely written. I agree with Syndra, nice to see a new poet producing such work here.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Reminds me

Of Yeats in a way.

Very nice work

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