All Comments on 'Scarlet Reminder'

Too many good ones for one day. Your words are wonderful.

Of Yeats in a way.

Very nice work

and nicely written. I agree with Syndra, nice to see a new poet producing such work here.

wistful melancholy

but a little choppy

and uneven.

question:

Should "is" in line 2 be "it"?

Is "it's" in line 3 supposed to be a contraction or possessive?

.... the lipstick speaks for itself.

expertly said. lovely to read. like a sweet cherry, i savored it!