by darkmaas
Into hedonism and back. I liked the superman vs. man images as he guiltily shrank back into reality. very good.
jim : )
what an insight into a man's mind. I absolutely love this Darkmaas, wonderful...mere humanity my butt...love, LOVE that line
....poetry, handled with confident expertise. Very impressive!
One that vividly paints the scene in few words and grasps the reader by his/her imagination.....and it doesn't hurt a bit!
Five.
then I'll decide where I can use it most! Terse, tight, powerful