All Comments on 'Screaming to be heard'

"Leave It To Beaver" is history, so's "Father Knows Best". By all means, kick ass and rebel.

A couple small editing suggestions for your first strophe:

"Is this my destiny?

To be listened to but not heard?

My mouth dry,

My throat raw,

Screaming to be heard;

No one listens,

No one gives a fuck!

Just play the good wife,

Good mother,

Hush now, conform!"

go where you will be truly happy!

into a situation like a housebound prisoner... never heard

Rage ~ Cry Out - dear lady. Awake those around you who slumber in the state of indifference.

i could of wrote that.thanks goodness you did.thanks.

and fixes her life to please her brood sans self. TK U MLJ LV NV