All Comments on 'Seasons of Dew'

by jd4george

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ReltneReltneover 19 years ago
Well seasoned words!

Woderful images! I particularly like winter's last line.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
That is

some sweet stuff.

I love this:

~Drifting with carousel leaves,

gusting wind chafes,

prickling my nostrils

with the smoke of her eyes.~

Man

That musta been some woman.

Thank you

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years agoAuthor
She is indeed some kind of woman!

Thanks for noticing, Tath!

I want to write more of her, but fear my words never really do her justice. She was, however, the inspiration of "Shadow Child".

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