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AngelineAngelinealmost 11 years ago
Agree with Harry

a surprising poem that goes in an unexpected direction at the end. Really well written although isn't the hat a Borsalino? Just a typo, I know, but I heard of these hats because I recently read a book in which they figured. Anyway an easy 5--you really have a way with erotic poetry.

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years agoAuthor
yes, Borsalino

typo --thanks

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