All Comments on 'Second Hand'

by OhMissScarlett

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jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
Some nice images...

...and some nice lines. Consider tinkering with the lines a little... breaking some and combining others, and the poem might seem tighter.

carsonshepherdcarsonshepherdover 19 years ago
Waaahhh...

I weep tears of love and recognition darling.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
!

This was wonderful.

So very Irish in it's tone and begrudging show of affection.

Well done

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
LOL

God I wish I'd written that!!!

Touche hon!! Well said ;-)

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