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Click hereYour fingers slide through my hair,
combing out resistance and good intentions.
Your kisses punctuate whispers on my neck:
I
want
you
need you
say yes
beautiful
so beautiful
Just hold me forever, I whisper,
feeling as though my heart can scarcely contain
this – so right – so wrong – so good – so sensual
He the Master of Seduction, I the Temptress,
no more teasing, just take me I am yours yours
I am drunk on your kisses,
intoxicated by your seduction,
a junkie of your candlelight loving.
kiss me kiss me kiss me my heart pounds
want you need you take me now now
my head spins with desire, no time for conscious thought
moans resonate from the very core of my being
I surrender.
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