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By SilentMercy
There is a place we all go to be Ourselves
Somewhere in the ripples of Never and Always
Where the peaks and valleys of a time-worn past
Refract pitilessly against an infinite sky of amnesia
Where there is no pleasure, no pain
But a quiet, persistent lull
That reminds us of the Nothingness from whence we sprung
There is a place we have all been
Somewhere in the ripples of Never and Always
Where the toils of Death bore the Fruits of Life
When nothing else mattered, and the anti-void gave way to our first breath
Where the Seed of Time emerged a drone, the canvas to which we add gray with our hearts
And black with our minds
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI agree with the previous comment that the use of too many capital letters detracts from the poem, and 'sprang' would be preferable, being grammatically correct. Otherwise, it's a very good effort.
UnderYourSpellabout 13 years agoI like this although I don't think the capital letters are needed for extra emphasis, not sure if 'sprung' should be 'sprang'
