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Gi_Venus
Gi_Venus
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I sense the beauty.
I feel the frightening immensity
of the open mind.
My heart beats with the passion of life.
The many paths all opening to more paths
Most touched with a beautiful light.
I cannot see if it is there or me.
But love is here, it calls undeniable
in its song for my devotion.
Grace in life, gentle in action
Soft guiding light to kiss my brow
an soothe my spirit.

Gi_Venus
Gi_Venus
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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 16 years ago
Lovely

This was very sweet and compelling. Thank you for sharing it with me. ~ Red

wildsweetonewildsweetoneabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the New Poems Reviews in the Poetry Forum.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Sweet...

love is always in the air..

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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There's quite an undertow to your words that might be missed. The calming effect of love on the rational mind but in the passionate mind, all hell's breaking loose!