by Toward A Word
this is sooo very deep, and so true, well written and much enjoyed :)
"We were born convicted" about sums it up. Love that line, but enjoyed it all. Try not to feel so much, Toward, it just gets you into trouble <winks>.
This was very good. The first time through I read it as prison, until I got to the line about crawling over those you love. Escape from the hell of the ghetto? Either way, a fascinating read with a gritty feel. I like it a lot.
Only thing I'm not sure of is the climbing over the ones you love- doesn't matter that much. Loved the flow and feeling.Thanks.