All Comments on 'september stoicism'

I mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. - wildsweetone (the 50% temp rating is so that it does not affect future temp ratings on this submission)

are the first to hit me like a freight truck in forever. "this day, each thud of my shoe

against hardwood or black asphalt

stirred up truckloads of adjectives

like clouds of dust" thanks, I needed some fuel.