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All Comments on 'Seven Minutes Shy of Ten Hours'
by foehn2
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ElmerGlewover 16 years agoThis one seems uneven to me.
The early stanzas read almost as prose and I find them, frankly, a little dull. But that closing stanza is marvelous and makes the poem. Beautiful image.
twelveooneover 16 years ago*
the call on it being a little too prose-like, dead on, I like the tone, though it was something like a bit of cinnamon, in the chili.
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