All Comments on 'Sexual Supplement'

Simply Sublime Syntax!

I love the idea of writing a poem with words that all start with the same letter. I've written a few of these myself and think it's great practice for finding just the right words when writing a poem; it disciplines the writer. I think you could have developed it even more (though I know these kinds of poems aren't easy to write), and would have found that the more of this kind of writing you do, the easier it becomes to use the poet's tools (imagery, metaphor, etc.) and still have every word start with the same letter.

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