All Comments on 'Shadow Child'

this was a very nice poem, it tugged at my heart in a personal way.

lovely jd! ty

those moments go unseen.

I'm glad you were there to capture this one.

Thank you

This says much more than it appears to

...of the red "H". Beautiful and mysterious.

wow That took me right straight back to the Ferry from Portland to Long Island in Casco Bay! How I wish I could go again for real! Thank you very much!

phrasing that sparkles. Word and image choice can not be questioned at all. The first stanza especially would read smoother to me with properly inserted commas, since the pauses are obvious anyway, and you are using marks in this piece.