by evelyn_carroll
I reckon you enjoy writing your stuff as much as we enjoy reading it. Great Fun.
Your wit and deft phrasing make this a delightful read. Well done, Ms. Carroll!
Fly
Oh to be thirty-five years younger and recite this in the school play and watch the teachers collapse one by one of apoplectic fits!
I must read the reviews more often!
b'brig
God, I hate sonnets, you got an 100 from the first line
"Shall I compare you with a real good lay?"
and it just gets better
"But hark! What slut in yonder bedroom fakes"
and if you have the good sense, when you are trashin' the classics to pick the very best
Better than 100
You're a much better man than I, I would have picked William Blake
twelveone suggest that I might be better inspired by Blake than by the Immoral Bard. I have only one thing to say to this:
It is an easy thing to compose in the tents of prosperity:
Thus could I sing & thus compose: but it is not so with me.