Shattered Shells

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Eggshells crunch
silence ensues
   tiptoe
       whisper
become invisible.


The fuse is lit
tension mounts
   clock
       ticks
          watch
             wait
trembling throughout.


Stomach churns
fists clench
   tears
       fall
like rain.


A door is slammed
footsteps pound
   shots
       fired
          blood
             splatters
tension’s released.


Handcuffs lock
murder charge
   judge
       rules
self defense


Nightmare jolts, shadows creep
scream echoes
   heart
       pounds
          mind
             hears
eggshells crunch.

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
I enjoyed...

the spiral descent of the words displayed, written from the passion you pen and images that tickled my chucklebone. Thanks for sharing... Art~

Aurora BlackAurora Blackalmost 18 years ago
Chilling

Jesus, Minx. You gave me chills! Great job!

oregon_galoregon_galalmost 18 years ago
saw toothed

loved the way you saw toothed the look of the poem as well as using your words the same way...thanks for the visual read!