by logophile
I don't quite have words to tell you how powerful this is to me. Incredible, Logo. Beyond stroking your ego, and into truth, you've made my soul ache and my heart actually hurt. You've distilled moments of hope and joy and sorrow into a poem of incredible intensity. I do like your style.
This is powerful. The depth of feeling makes me little sad myself.
Logo, you've bared your soul and a piece of your life, and I can't find the words to describe my reaction to it. THIS is poetry...raw and real. I love the way you tried to hide the emotion, until in the end it overwhelms both you and the reader. You're a better writer than ever!
I feel these words - I've so been there, and it's sad and sweet all in one.
Power on so many different levels. Intense feelings joined, shared, snatched away. Wow. Thank you
Hugo
So, so powerful, the ending was like a punch to the gut. I'm very impressed with your control and craft in writing about a subject that is so easy to get out of control and turn into a cliche.
BD