All Comments on 'She Said'

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yuiyuiabout 18 years ago
Oy, the power of this one hurts me

I don't quite have words to tell you how powerful this is to me. Incredible, Logo. Beyond stroking your ego, and into truth, you've made my soul ache and my heart actually hurt. You've distilled moments of hope and joy and sorrow into a poem of incredible intensity. I do like your style.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
touched

passion in a write, worded poetically, nice poem.

sacksackabout 18 years ago
bittersweet.....

and I hope not autobiographical??

Harry LegHarry Legabout 18 years ago
Powerful

This is powerful. The depth of feeling makes me little sad myself.

BelegonBelegonabout 18 years ago
sad

very sad...but very good.

gotwood49gotwood49about 18 years ago
wow...

Logo, you've bared your soul and a piece of your life, and I can't find the words to describe my reaction to it. THIS is poetry...raw and real. I love the way you tried to hide the emotion, until in the end it overwhelms both you and the reader. You're a better writer than ever!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Bittersweet.

I feel these words - I've so been there, and it's sad and sweet all in one.

lucky-E-levenlucky-E-levenabout 18 years ago
She's an idiot

That's all.

hugo_samhugo_samabout 18 years ago
Depth

Power on so many different levels. Intense feelings joined, shared, snatched away. Wow. Thank you

Hugo

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 17 years ago
^

So, so powerful, the ending was like a punch to the gut. I'm very impressed with your control and craft in writing about a subject that is so easy to get out of control and turn into a cliche.

BD

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