All Comments on 'She won't cry'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
A sad poem

Hi -

I know this is just a poetical story, but reading it engenders in me a powerful urge to make her cry, to give her some release, and (maybe!) lend some happiness.

Well done - The stories I like are the ones with emotion.

Thanks

ChagrinedChagrinedalmost 19 years ago
WOW!! This was great!

Great editor and great poetess. Raw emotions!

can it get better??

PAPATOADPAPATOADalmost 19 years ago
Thank you

Great piece of work. Appreciate the result.

sacksackover 18 years ago
very effective.....

can I cry?

sacksackover 18 years ago
very effective.....

can I cry?

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