All Comments on 'Sidhe Devils'

by Mr_Mescalito

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normal jeannormal jeanalmost 20 years ago
moral?

maybe I see something that isnt there, but I really like this poem, esp this part-

The sea appears as but a castle moat,

Sure they followed us here.

Hidden in whiskey,

And tobacco, and song.

To dance the dance on new soil,

To shout out the victories by rote.

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyalmost 20 years ago
a chilling message

i thought this said plenty.

kinda sad really.

nice read

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Can hear the murmurs...

I enjoy how this pulls you along through the mist...nicely done.

~Merry

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
first couple of lines

pull the reader right in. I love all your word choices. This is a fantastic poem!

*No longer using the thermometer.

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