by Mr_Mescalito
maybe I see something that isnt there, but I really like this poem, esp this part-
The sea appears as but a castle moat,
Sure they followed us here.
Hidden in whiskey,
And tobacco, and song.
To dance the dance on new soil,
To shout out the victories by rote.
i thought this said plenty.
kinda sad really.
nice read
I enjoy how this pulls you along through the mist...nicely done.
~Merry
pull the reader right in. I love all your word choices. This is a fantastic poem!
*No longer using the thermometer.