All Comments on 'Silence Never Ending'

not an expert on this particular form but your poem grabbed my attention. The repeating line of 'Silence never ending' and the quickly contrasting imagery made this stick in my head.

p.s your poem has been mentioned in today's new poem reviews

Evocative, thoughtful poem. I know little of poetry styles or types but the poem itself was laden with feeling. Thank you

Hugo

Great job, Minx!

I loved this poem !!

You grabbed us from the first line. Showered us with beautiful, and heartfelt imagery. Then let us fly free within the silence ~ Great poem !!

For a first attempt, you captured the movement very nicely, not perfect, but well done. Keep it up!