All Comments on 'Silent Man'

especially the dedication 5ed

Last line in penultimate verse; "forget" should be "forgot" obviously. Although on second thoughts I suppose Silent Man could be careless about typos. That would fit.

This perfectly describes my encounter with multiple silent men in my life!

Thank you my dear friend for writing a lovely poem for me :)

Angel

a five

it's fun,

a little unweeded perhaps. i.e. do you need:

I call up my friend but she says "Don't sweat it"

That's all very well, but she clearly don't get it.

It's been over eight hours; bad thoughts fill my head.

What if he's in hospital, injured or dead?