All Comments on 'Sins Dessert'

Your poem has been mentioned in the Sunday reviews.

du lac!

Now this is one HOTTT Poem!

Sexy isn't the word, this

piece is on fire, with passion

and lust and pure driven animal

instincts!

drink the sin, from my

lips, of lechery. taste

my juice, of jasmine

jelly. lick, till you

drop.

This is fucking Hot Poetry

my smutty, nutty, buddy! <grins>

~ Jenn

a very teasing and pleasing poem, RF you have grown into a beautiful addition to lits daily sprout of poetry flowers grin... I enjoy your poetry for as lot of reasons, one is it is understandable and not a puzzle, thank you for this <grin>

massage..however ,,, since we must be more abstract..you missed your capitals...dang...I do that so often ...blue

Hey there, RF ~

listen to JC, your little smutty, buddy;

she knows of what she speaks;

you're hot here and not a sweet lil soccer Mom;

you define new standards

for what it means to be a red hot Sex Machine !!

Sssssssmokin............

Sweet little soccer mom ?

Oh hell ya, the kind that

packs a sexy ass punch,

NEWS FLASH !!!!!

she aint dead yet !!

lol.....

and yes gurl,

you are

smmmmmmokin !

*****

-sGp-