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LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
Naughty~

Liked this one.. Very naughty.. The flow was a lil off for me, or maybe just needed more of the poem.. Loved the imagery..The poem was naughty an hot..Thinkin this one is deeper than it appears on the first reading..A must read again.. .. Keep'm coming...

echoes_sechoes_sover 19 years ago
the question to be is...

did you really lose yourself or find your freedom?

hugs

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wow

so much emotion. this was very deep great job V-M

keep up the great work

PJ

kaitlynBkaitlynBover 17 years ago
Well captured

Really like this; conveys the feeling very well

DuPainDuPainabout 17 years ago
SShhhhh

Loved it Vamp, you naughty, romantic girl.

DuPain

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