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by jessabelle718
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fridayamabout 13 years agoI liked
some of this, but the words keep contradicting themselves: skin is red, then pink, then white. Images have to have a consistency for a poem to work. Nevertheless, there is much to like here. You have a good sense of rhythm, which I hope you will develop. Please write more.
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