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TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Nice

capture of the D/s interplay.

Well done and very sexy !

Whispering_Wolf57Whispering_Wolf57almost 20 years ago
Great!

I love this poetry of yours, I wish you the best baby

Kitten89Kitten89almost 15 years ago
vivid

You are very good at painting a picture, I can see everything as I read it, well done. I feel like the rhyming is a little forced at times. Keep on writing.

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