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Full moon resolve
Yields to five-finger logic
Slid between Naugahyde seats.
Sweat slicked sinners
Went down for the count
While, pine-fresh sentinel’s failed.
Search for oblivion
Lead nowhere, but fast
Smokes, the best part of that ride.
Night sky indifference
Shone down on shadowed lace
Mr. Moon keeps passing me by.
...who can you trust? His dereliction of duty cracked me up! Wonderful poem, Merry!
and provacative for sure...leaves you will a youthful chuckle....smiling/blue
could be high school make out memories or a modern day tryst.
Leaves just enough unsaid to make the reader work a little.
loved the phrase " full moon resolve"
Nice work
Thank you
in this very erotic poem. I loved the five finger logic on naugahyde and the pine-scent failure. I think perhaps drop the apostrophe on sentinel and I wondered if "lead" wanted to be "leads" following your "Search for oblivion." Either way it's a unique, realistically sexy poem. Well done.
jim : )