All Comments on 'Sleepless Ramble'

in this very erotic poem. I loved the five finger logic on naugahyde and the pine-scent failure. I think perhaps drop the apostrophe on sentinel and I wondered if "lead" wanted to be "leads" following your "Search for oblivion." Either way it's a unique, realistically sexy poem. Well done.

jim : )

I smile as I read, delightful.

could be high school make out memories or a modern day tryst.

Leaves just enough unsaid to make the reader work a little.

loved the phrase " full moon resolve"

Nice work

Thank you

and provacative for sure...leaves you will a youthful chuckle....smiling/blue

Very erotic, and very controlled. Loved it!

...who can you trust? His dereliction of duty cracked me up! Wonderful poem, Merry!