Slow Burn

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Your words branded
my soul. Skillful precision
scoring
a direct hit. Shamelessly
shackling this lady
love to the burning bed
of desires embrace. Longing wails
call out from within, will you
do it again? Whisper burning
passion-filled words of want,
need. Yearnings silently spoken
ricochet from the cabalistic
corners of your heart, shouting
out to be free
to feel the fierce
fire, the blinding burn of two
bodies ... rub. Five fingers
clawed, gripping tight. Slow
tension
wiggles shaking
loose. Slow
bodies, slow
burn
slow

slow


slow


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* Special "Thank You" to 4 Degrees, for his inspiring writing on the Passion Thread ~

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4degrees4degreesabout 18 years ago
damn

you sound like

you sound so much

like me, my hot

passion, a slow burn

from the inside

the right side, the

one place i feel

that all too real

bronzing

passion

that stops me in

my tracks, can't

step back or

back away, i'm

in the fray and

on the fringe

of doing it

being in it

all over again.

thank you, RF, for the passion play.

curt

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
there

you go burnin up the pages with another HoTT one...with some delightful words...afire...sighs/blue

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
superb

slow

slow

slowly, I enjoyed this poem sprinkled with the poetic charm of a very passionate pen. (~_~)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I like the rhythm and phrasing

especially this:

Yearnings silently spoken

ricochet from the cabalistic

corners of your heart, shouting

out to be free

to feel the fierce

fire, the blinding burn of two

bodies ... rub.

Yowzir! Very hot...

TeeTeeTeeTeeabout 18 years ago
Loved It!!!

Right on girl

you pulled me in from the very start

thanks for sharing

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