All Comments on 'Slow Burn'

Right on girl

you pulled me in from the very start

thanks for sharing

especially this:

Yearnings silently spoken

ricochet from the cabalistic

corners of your heart, shouting

out to be free

to feel the fierce

fire, the blinding burn of two

bodies ... rub.

Yowzir! Very hot...

slow

slow

slowly, I enjoyed this poem sprinkled with the poetic charm of a very passionate pen. (~_~)

you go burnin up the pages with another HoTT one...with some delightful words...afire...sighs/blue

you sound like

you sound so much

like me, my hot

passion, a slow burn

from the inside

the right side, the

one place i feel

that all too real

bronzing

passion

that stops me in

my tracks, can't

step back or

back away, i'm

in the fray and

on the fringe

of doing it

being in it

all over again.

thank you, RF, for the passion play.

curt