All Comments on 'Slut'

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BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years ago
blunt and bold

I really like this poem. It was fun and refreshingly blunt and bold.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Hot...and very sensual...

and right to the point. I love that straight forward approach. Thanks.

FifthFlowerFifthFlowerabout 17 years ago
nice meter

Nice meter and content. The only line I would change is "My slut, my whore" to "my slut and my whore" for the meter's sake.

darkerdreamerdarkerdreamerabout 17 years ago
Personally...

I hate this poem. Why? You can bluntly say what I try to stylize and always fail at. An excellent piece for sure.

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