by halfdwarf
I really like this poem. It was fun and refreshingly blunt and bold.
and right to the point. I love that straight forward approach. Thanks.
Nice meter and content. The only line I would change is "My slut, my whore" to "my slut and my whore" for the meter's sake.
I hate this poem. Why? You can bluntly say what I try to stylize and always fail at. An excellent piece for sure.