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All Comments on 'Smiling Down On Me'

by Hyades

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tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

A bit long but very well done! :)

fridayamfridayamabout 13 years ago
Make this much shorter

and eschew the cliche and you would have a poem worth reading and writing. We all know what is involved in sex so you don't have to spell it out--cut down to the nub of it. I enjoyed your sincerity:)

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