by thewantonscribe
I love the images that you've painted in your poem. Very festive and cute!
As a northerner, I can truly appreciate the beauty of snow, (well until the third month of it anyway). =D I really like that you get that feeling across of the way the snow adds life to the winter landscape. My only issue with the poem were technical errors. The "what some see as dead" goes from branches to an it in the same stanza, and a minor typo (missing a t). Some tightening would make this worthy for rough seas. Otherwise, beautifully done in terms of your balanced stanzas and imagery.
who may never have had the pleasure of snow and or the beauty of it...
nice write