by My Erotic Tale
a plot seems to zoom right over the way i precondition my eyes to view...this is one of those situations....the rhyme is good ,,time is good and flow...but,as to the story tis something I just don't know...see even you can be a bit of a mystery...winks....blue
that i can see doubles working. i especially enjoy the middle two stanzas. i also dig the last line too. nicely done......don
Your such a charmer ~!!
I loved this poem ... a friend and a fox.
A lil wild they can be,
yet thinkin you must'a fed'm real good.
Poor lil mights momma and sister...
Cute and heartwarming friendship here~!!
Art, you are master at writing making it seem something. Then bringing it home as something completely different.
I bow to your Talent.
S&L