All Comments on 'soft lace and thunder'

...made to be savoured, considered, the spaces between contemplated as much as the words and images separating them

a write that has me musing to myself, catching reflections. thankyou for submitting this.

succinct and evocative

The objects of poetry are a sense of wonder, usually met by originality, and not saying too much. This does it for me.

"married cloud reflected in a mirror pool"

a line I've never seen before, and a question at the end

or do i rise

A five