All Comments on 'Solution'

however, all your end stops and rhyme make your work feel a bit mechanical. Your first line is a grabber, it drew me into the poem. You have quality lines but some further work could make your poem flow. I know, we all get tired of that word, f l o w. But it matters . I will continue to read you as you seem like a talent that needs to be nurtured. I enjoyed your work and look forward to watching you grow :)

~ maria

I agree, the periods at the end of lines in this piece detract a lot from the flow.

Like the like about devouring.

" his touches were addictive " 'stead of " addictin'" ?