All Comments on 'Sophia Jane'

again, a wonderful subtle touch here. Very good.

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It's amazing how a simple av can evoke so much emotion. Perhaps I should change mine. LOL!

and to the point......loved it!!

My tongue is tingling am my **** is hard!

And I thought it was just guys turned on my visuals. You ladies of Lit have visuals that keep me up at night. And I too have been known to write based on an AV. Thank you Dar. And good work.

And I thought it was just guys turned on by visuals. You ladies of Lit, have visuals keep me up at nights, and have inspired me too to write. Good job Dar. Thank you.

She is a hot little number isn't she :)~Minx

Dar- what a compliment! And a great poem too!