All Comments on 'sort of not touching you'

I really like the images of "touch" here. They give the poem a gray and wistful feel. I think the last stanza does not live up to the strength of the rest of the poem, though.

in this poem. I like it. :) But the first stanza was so good that it made the other stanzas not quite as equal to it. I think it only needs a little revising to reach its potential.

the poem is now revised a bit; thanks for the comments.